I was totally intrigued by the pairing since I love both of them (and while I was a little iffy about breaking them up with Kris/Chris) THIS WAS EVERYTHING I WANTED IT TO BE AND MORE. Your Zach is amazing, first of all--the 'gay and self-aware and totally pwing everything' works for him so well, and it worked fabulously with your Adam, who was very human and not overdone, and seemed very IC. The balance between sex and friendship here is effective and really well done. And I loved the mentions of Chris and shooting Star Trek, and of Kris and Drake, and the little looks into their lives that we recognize that made this fic seem very real.
Also, it's HOT LIKE BURNING, so that's always a plus. :)
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Date: 2009-07-30 05:21 am (UTC)I was totally intrigued by the pairing since I love both of them (and while I was a little iffy about breaking them up with Kris/Chris) THIS WAS EVERYTHING I WANTED IT TO BE AND MORE. Your Zach is amazing, first of all--the 'gay and self-aware and totally pwing everything' works for him so well, and it worked fabulously with your Adam, who was very human and not overdone, and seemed very IC. The balance between sex and friendship here is effective and really well done. And I loved the mentions of Chris and shooting Star Trek, and of Kris and Drake, and the little looks into their lives that we recognize that made this fic seem very real.
Also, it's HOT LIKE BURNING, so that's always a plus. :)