So: I greatly admired your previous fics wherein you used Chris-voice. A judicious choice, I thought, especially when it is so very enjoyable to have Zach's hopeless crush on Chris be clear to all and sundry except Chris. It would be way too squishy and saccharine to have Zach pining *cough* for Chris from Zach-perspective.
So I thought.
I was wrong! ^_^ Your Zach-POV is successful and delicious: Zach is instantly crippled, you write, and I was instantly convinced that why yes, I do need to watch Chris drive Zach crazy from inside Zach's brain.
Really we should all just give up now and worship Cap'n Fine's perfect thighs together. unf.
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So I thought.
I was wrong! ^_^ Your Zach-POV is successful and delicious: Zach is instantly crippled, you write, and I was instantly convinced that why yes, I do need to watch Chris drive Zach crazy from inside Zach's brain.
Really we should all just give up now and worship Cap'n Fine's perfect thighs together. unf.